Tailoring Your Pitch: Storytelling for Early-Stage Fundraising in Climate

Lessons from Enduring Planet & Friends' Financing Series.

In a market where AI soaks up most of the oxygen, the climate founders who get funded aren't the ones with the flashiest deck. They're the ones whose story holds together.

At our latest Enduring Planet & Friends Financing Series, "Tailoring Your Pitch: Storytelling for Early-Stage Fundraising in Climate," Dimitry Gershenson (Enduring Planet) and Hannah Friedman (Lupine Finance) led the conversation with Daniel Beer (General Proxy), Marie Thompson (Powerhouse Ventures), and Kathlyn Mead (BQuest Foundation) on how climate founders can build a fundraising narrative that lands with any kind of capital. 

We structured the conversation around three threads: the financial narrative, communicating impact, and cutting through the AI noise.

The Financial Narrative: Build It Before You Pitch

A "compelling financial story" is one of those phrases everyone nods along to and almost nobody defines. 

A great financial story holds two altitudes at once.
Investors need to see both the strategic vision and the granular financial detail underneath it. A story that lives at only one of those altitudes reads as either hand-wavy or lost in the weeds. Start high-level, then deepen as the relationship develops. 

The founders who win move fluidly between the two, signaling that they understand both where the company is going and what the next twelve months actually look like. Your first conversation is not the place for the full model. Earn the right to go deeper. 

At the earliest stages, your model isn't graded on accuracy. It's graded on strategy.
Nobody believes a seed-stage projection is precise, and that isn't the point. And, if you’re building your financial model for the first time because investors have asked for it, you’re behind. 

Early projections are a test of pattern matching and strategic consistency, and the financial model shows investors you’ve thought through the variables and know how much risk they could pose to the bottom line of the business. 

Your financial narrative is also an opportunity to express judgment and consistency. Do your assumptions hang together? Do they reflect how this market actually works? Do they show that you have thought a few moves ahead? 

Fundraising is a process built on trust, not a single performance.
Founders who only surface when they need capital start from zero every time and dramatically reduce their probability of closing. Founders who feel like they need to explain everything in the first meeting are missing an opportunity to show restraint. 

In financial models and storytelling, specificity is a proxy for judgment. When the numbers you present don't match the numbers you actually run the company on, sophisticated investors notice, and the trust you were building evaporates. Worse, vague or inconsistent financial data throughout materials signal that the founder hasn't done the work or doesn’t understand the fundamental drivers or assumptions of the business well enough.

2. Communicating Impact Without Losing the Room

Impact is having a strange moment. In some rooms it is the entire thesis. In others it reads as soft, or worse, as a signal that the founder doesn't prioritize returns. The honest answer to "how should I talk about impact" depends almost entirely on who is sitting across the table.

Impact and financial viability are not a trade-off you get to choose between.
Even at impact-first funds and foundations, the investment committee needs to see both impact and financial viability. The path through any IC is to demonstrate that your business is commercially defensible and that the impact follows from the business succeeding, not in spite of it. Founders who try to substitute one story for the other lose either way.

Put the impact story in front of the right person on your team.
Impact-first companies often fail to land because the impact narrative and the financial narrative come from different people speaking different languages. Find the executive who can bridge both, and/or divide responsibilities between people pitching. Authentic passion paired with rigorous diligence is the combination that travels.

Be willing to challenge your own impact narrative.
Leading with impact for its own sake can quietly work against you with allocators who came up underwriting financial returns. A more durable approach: lead with customer prioritization, and let the impact follow from a business that obviously works. Moving quickly into investor discovery can also help build empathy for their mandates, underwriting hurdles and other investment constraints in order to meet them with a narrative that helps them achieve their goals and make the case internally. 

Whatever impact claims you do make, be ready to back them with the same depth of evidence you would bring to any other part of the pitch.

3. Cutting Through the AI Noise When You're Not an AI Company

For climate and impact founders who aren't building AI, the hardest part of the market today is simply getting attention. The panel's guidance was counterintuitive: the answer is not more AI.

A deck an investor recognizes as AI-generated is the opposite of breaking through.
AI tools are very good at producing content that looks exactly like everyone else's content. Decks and financial models built primarily with AI tend to come out generic, formulaic, and immediately spottable. Use AI as a productivity tool, not as a substitute for defining your business’ value proposition or a compelling growth narrative.

The thinking that "has to be yours" becomes more valuable, not less, as everything around it gets automated.
Your judgment, your conviction, your read on the market, your relationships: these are the parts of fundraising that cannot be outsourced. Founders who rely on AI to do the thinking lose the edge they actually have.

Strong fundamentals and persistent effort remain the most reliable levers.
For female (and other underrepresented) founders navigating systemic barriers, the playing field is not level, and the panel didn't pretend otherwise. The honest and useful takeaway is that the levers a founder actually controls are still the same ones: clean business fundamentals, a clear narrative, and consistent effort over time. Optimize what you can, but take extra effort into account during the planning & preparation phase. 

Tactical Takeaways

In a market full of AI-generated decks and borrowed impact language, the founders who break through are the ones whose story is genuinely their own and whose numbers hold up under scrutiny. Key takeaways:

• Hold two altitudes at once, pairing the strategic vision with the financial detail underneath it.
• Early projections demonstrate judgment, not precision. Make the assumptions resonate with your thinking and help elucidate risks and sensitivities.
• Use your financial model to run the business before you use it to raise. Mismatches destroy trust.
• Impact and financial viability are not either/or. Show both, through the right voice on your team.
• Lead with the business bottom line and let impact reinforce it. Challenge your own impact narrative.
• AI makes generic decks faster, but cannot manufacture conviction. Protect the thinking that has to be yours.

Thank you to Wilson Sonsini Goodrich & Rosati for sponsoring this series.

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